User:Citmoreno9/Killer ape theory/Aletariel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Citmoreno9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Citmoreno9/Killer_ape_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
I've heard of this niche theory before and I am glad that it is finally receiving it's own dedicated wiki page. However, the original context in which Ive heard this was in relation to why Neanderthals disappeared around the time we showed up. Perhaps bring that particular aspect into this article? Otherwise this is a good start article with reputable sources, and I look forward to seeing it go live!