User:Citmoreno9/Killer ape theory/Orosas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Citmoreno9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Citmoreno9/Killer_ape_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Grammar needs review and some sentences are unclear. I dont think the slant is necessary. Try and link/incorporate your references within the article. Maybe add some pictures? Overall, a little unclear but a good start.