User:Cjames2020/Sex work/IIT JPeters Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cjames2020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cjames2020/Sex_work?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex work

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's tough to work on Wikipedia, I get it. Reading through the sex work page, the risks subheading is quite lacking and could likely be improved with clearer distinctions between legal risks, worker risks, and workplace risks. The legal framework and history sections are both well polished and would be difficult to improve upon, perhaps you could attempt to organize them by continent/country but perhaps it's better to pick a different section. If there is ample data, the empowerment section could be expanded upon, as sex work is generally disregarded by the mainstream, and with only two subheadings, there is plenty of room for more content. Overall, the sex work article has some weak spots and some strong spots, but I'm confident you'll find an area where you can make a lot of improvement. I wish you the best with this article and assignment, take care.