User:Cjaneellen/Sport psychology/Allysch Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Cjaneellen
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cjaneellen/Sport psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The article you have chosen seems like a very detailed article to evaluate. Your article starts out with a good history of the topic and should give good information for you to read/edit. I do believe there is excess material within the article that could be taken out and get the point across quicker. Some paragraphs seem slightly repetitive within the personality portion of the article. Seems like you are off to a great start, of course just keep adding more information and making changes as you see fit.