User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum/Lizziecalero Peer Review

General info
Cjbutler14526
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Clostridium botulinum

Evaluate the drafted changes
There doesn't seem to be a Lead in this article's sandbox, so I assume that they will be using the Lead from the original article/didn't need to update the Lead. The Lead from the original article is detailed and concise. Content-wise, the original article is full of content and detail-heavy, and the sandbox shows progress in making the content more digestible and easier to read flow-wise. It doesn't seem that a lot of new content was really added to the article in the sandbox, but the article does already have a lot of original content. The sandbox shows intentions of adding a Microbiology section, which will improve the article. A transmission and sporulation section was added in the sandbox, which was well-written and backed up by a reliable source. It seems that the Pathology, Treatment, and Vaccination sections were removed from the original article in the sandbox, which I think should be added back in to enhance the article's overall breadth of content. No images have been added yet, which I also think could enhance the article. Overall, the editing process of this article is well underway, but some focus should be shifted to finding new, quality content to add to the existing content in the article.