User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum/Sam Ball Peer Review

General info
Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium_botulinum&action=edit:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium_botulinum&action=edit:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There isn't clearly designated lead paragraph with labels. The beginning of the article is confusing because it does not have a real start position with general knowledge of the bacteria. This could be the basics such as the classification of the bacteria. There are few grammatical erros such as not capitalizing the first letter in a sentence in the morphology section. Some sentences are not cited in multiple sections. This is are good starting point for your article.