User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum/Sf87653 Peer Review

General info
Cjbutler14526
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cjbutler14526/Clostridium botulinum
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Clostridium botulinum

Evaluate the drafted changes
First, I really enjoyed the information about "Use and detection" and "Growth conditions and prevention" and how they related back to common life practices.

However, the growth conditions section covers food-bourne and infant botulism, so maybe add in add in something about where wound botulism could occur and how that affects the body.

The microbiology section seemed sparse (I can see that metabolism is still being worked on). I'm not sure if it's in the article already but explaining the serotypes more would be useful because at this point it is unclear as to what the types mean especially when you reference them in the geographical locations section.

There seems to be a lot of missing citations specifically in the Use and detection section.

Is there any information about the structure: gram-positive/negative, motility structures?

How do they reproduce?

Maybe think about the structure because the transmission section might flow well with the growth conditions section talking about the spread from one source to another.