User:Cjervoo/sandbox

ACTIVIST ARTICLE in User: Cjervoo

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Activist article Action Plan: started 23/08/2019.


 * 1) Deviance (sociology) - Not sure if this is perhaps too big a task or if I can revise or extend some existing issues on the page. How much would I revise?

'''AS YOU POINT OUT BELOW, THERE ARE ALREADY PROBLEMS IDENTIFIED WITH THIS PAGE. IT WOULD BE APPROPRIATE FOR THE ASSIGNMENT IN SOCI3047 TO TAKE A CONSIDERABLE CHUNK OF THE ARTICLE AND RESTRUCTURE/WRITE IT WHILE ADDING SOME NEW MATERIAL/SOURCES AND/OR LINKS TO OTHER PAGES ETC.'''

Expand on the Functions and types of deviance... ALSO A GOOD IDEA - A SPECIFIC TASK THAT IS DO-ABLE.

IT IS ALSO POSSIBLE THERE MAY BE OTHERS IN THE CLASS WHO WOULD BE INTERESTED IN WORKING ON THIS PAGE WITH YOU SO YOU COULD BREAK IT UP INTO SECTIONS EACH OF YOU WORK ON AND SUBMIT FOR YOUR INDIVIDUAL ASSIGNMENT.

2.This page has been rated as a start class and has a warning banner stating multiple issues. Tasks are awaiting attention to improve the article. Contributing to delivering quality information and accurate articles particularly academic articles on a university topic is of interest. The topic of the article covers the notability requirements of Wikipedia, however, any revisions or inclusions would need the necessary requirements of suitable, reliable sources and references. Language to reflect neutral coverage with no opinions, reflections or essay format is essential.....

3. Check List


 * Find sources
 * Draft article revisions
 * Is structure clear?
 * Factual not essay format?
 * add links
 * add references to reliable sources

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Top 3 personal interests 1.Goldendoodle 2.Sustainable_fashion 3.Charity_shop 4.Musical_theatre

Top 3 academic interests 1.Behavioural_sciences. 2.Sociology 3.Industrial_and_organizational_psychology 4.Psychological_resilience

Testing a first edit with grammar correction - c/e

Additionally, as a societies understanding of social norms changes over time, so to does the collective perception of deviance - original sentence. Deviance (sociology)

Additionally, as a society's understanding of social norms changes over time, so to does the collective perception of deviance - correction.