User:Cjhartford20/Frank Little (unionist)/BeastMode4403 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cjhartford20


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cjhartford20/Frank_Little_%28unionist%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Frank Little (unionist)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lots of it seems similar to the actual article. Possibly get some more/new information to add. Good usage of hyperlinks as they clear up ambiguity.

Possibly add a new section in the "Industrial Workers of the World" section. This is pretty lengthy. A section like Dates and Location would fit in well into the second paragraph and even the third.