User:Cjones1015/Gender pay gap in sports/Abbygilk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Cjones1015


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cjones1015/Gender_pay_gap_in_sports?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gender pay gap in sports

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the syntax of the additions and edits are very neutral and well laid out. There is no bias in any of the wording and this is clearly shown through stated facts. I think that the media added is very representative and depicts the issue at hand very clearly, well selected. I appreciate that there were so many specific examples added to this article, so that it shows that the issue is present throughout the entire industry (soccer, basketball, golf, etc.)

Very excellent work on using secondary sources to back all of the statements made about pay gaps. This has posed as a huge problem for my group so it's nice to see that for your group it worked out very well. (because Wikipedia is supposed to rely on secondary sources.)

Overall I think that the contributions to this wiki article has been very well done. I appreciate thought out syntax and wording throughout the entire article. I also appreciate that such an important topic was chosen and taken seriously.