User:Cjung10/Crystal Bird Fauset/Cdaless1 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * Cjung10
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Cjung10/Crystal Bird Fauset

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes, the lead has been greatly expanded
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * The lead names her as first female African-American state legislator, but this is not said outright in the section about her time in the state legislature. This could be included in both sections, as it is significant.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The expansion of the lead did improve it, but now it could be made more concise. Focusing the lead on outlining the sections to follow rather than as a source of information itself will help with the organization and conciseness of both the lead and body of the article.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes, all content is relevant
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No, the content pertains to Fauset and provides wonderful detail about her life and work that is not present in the original article.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No, the article neutral
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No, her life is outlined factually
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No, the article comes across as informational and not persuasive

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes, sources look reliable
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Yes to my knowledge
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes, and edits include more potential sources
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Included links work, but not all sources include links

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes, the article is well-written and clear
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No, it is grammatically correct. I did not see any spelling errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes, good use of headings and sub-headings to organize content

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Yes
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Yes, explains who is in the image
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * No known restrictions on the image
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * Not yet formatted

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?