User:Ckw27/Florence Emery Jones/DNUWwikiF Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ckw27


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ckw27/Florence Emery Jones


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Florence Emery Jones

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

I see that you're planning to add on what the wiki has already provided it. Keep up the good work once you have time!

Content:

Nice list of source that you have. Continue to cite what you have in your sections, and make sure that the content remain up to date.

Tone and Balance:

I notice that you

Source:

Great job finding the sources on Florence Jones. I hope those will be useful for the final draft.

Organization:

Overall, I find the draft coherent enough.

Overall Impression:

Nice addition to the event of the pregnant waitress! Make sure to continue expanding on her biography, and if you could find any photos that aren't copyrighted, would be great to include it as well.