User:Claire056/Carbon Connect Delta Program/Hbhathal Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Claire056


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Claire056/Carbon_Connect_Delta_Program?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The order of the sections makes sense.

Prioritize the carbon offsetting-potential section over the section about the region - it's more important.

I would like to know more about the technology components of this program.