User:Claire920181/Evaluate an Article

== Which article are you evaluating? ==

Camille Chamoun

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I was interested in editing a page on Lebanon for my course. To practise, I wanted to first choose another related page to evaluate. I looked at the pages that needed attention in the WikiProject Lebanon and found that this page had some comments on its historical accuracy. My first impression is that there are no sources listed for the entire sections of Career and activities and Crisis of 1958.

Evaluate the article
The lead has a satisfactory introductory sentence and a content box that lists the article's content, but does not include a further description of the article's contents.

The section on Career and activities seems very short compared to the other sections. It seems more can be said about this term as president. Moreover, this section and the next do not include any sources.

It is unclear why the anecdote on L. Dean Brown's diplomatic cable is added. More context could be given here.

The sources used are dated but reliable. A lot more citations are needed in the middle sections of the article. All links are working. The article is generally well written and grammatically correct, but some clarifications could be added to make the paragraphs easier to understand, especially references to persons mentioned earlier in a paragraph.

There are enough images to contribute to the quality of the page. Any more would be too much in relation to the length of the article.

It is clearly an active page; several changes have been made each year since 2006, with the last edit just earlier in February.