User:Clairec10/St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)/Miam1026 Peer Review

General info
Clairec10
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Clairec10/St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the current article utilizes only a few references, so utilizing secondary sources would be helpful in your additions to the page.

I think adding a section with the lead "different interpretations" would be an interesting and useful section. I also think you could expand on the use of the image in the "scuola" and talk about the way paintings were used in the scuola, and how this one in particular is important. I noticed in other wiki pages about paintings, there is a lead section for the "location" of the painting (maybe if you find enough information about it you can create this section as well).

I also believe there could maybe be a seperate section for the history of the painting, rather than the current "subject and historical misidentification," which might be better suited as a subheading of the broader history of the painting.

I do agree the article seems well developed, but I think there are some areas where the wording gets a bit confusing. For example in the first paragraph this sentence " The study, or stuliolo, that was a one way that Italian aristocrats and collectors that displayed wealth, power, taste, and worldly knowledge." doesn't really make sense. I think making sure the overall flow of the wiki page works would also be super useful.