User:Clairec10/St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)/VeniceLegend06 Peer Review

General info
Clairec10
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Clairec10/St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):St. Augustine in His Study (Carpaccio)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * I definitely agree that the article is very developed. Because of this, I think secondary sources might be something that you want to utilize.
 * Peter Humfrey's 2022 paper seems to be the most heavily cited in the article. Maybe you could take a look at the sources he cited in that article to see if they offer any new information/perspectives.
 * Additionally, I think some information (whether it be a section or just some sentences) on how the piece fits into Carpaccio's career, on a personal yet also on a stylistic level, could give readers a better understanding on the implications that the piece had on his time as an artist.