User:Clairer.svg/Hair in African Sculpture/Langgggg Peer Review

Overall suggestions: maybe add images and add some citations. Also you could link certain words to other wiki pages like for "Yoruba people". The sections seem interesting and relevant to the topic! This seems like a good start, just add more content and sources!

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)