User:Clark3ei/Latex allergy/AmakIdris Peer Review

General info
(Clark3ei/)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Clark3ei/Latex allergy - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Latex allergy - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content

Very relevant, main focus is risk factors and populations affected. I like your comprehensive edits, accuracy, and details. My comments about your edits are to expand on latex allergy challenges faced by the healthcare setting in developing countries. This could be a separate section to provide a global perspective. for example, access to latex-free alternatives, and awareness programs.

Tone and Balance

the edits have facts supported by research and citations.

Sources and References

The information added are well-cited, which made the edits credible. There are 8 references included which is a great work.

Organization

The edits are well-organized, and it is about the occupational epidemiology of latex allergy.

Images and Media

no images or media have been added yet, but I think including images will help the content. It will also enhance understanding, such as infographics or diagrams.

Overall Impressions

The edits you added improve the article. The detailed exploration of occupational risks and scientific references made the article stronger and added depth to the article.

I like your contributions to the article. ￼

(~) -Idris