User:ClassyIam/Meal replacement/Tesseractionable Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ClassyIam


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:ClassyIam/Meal replacement


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Meal replacement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sources seem to be reliable. The addition of "Environmental Impact" is sourced and neutral. The only issue I have with that section is "[…]sustainable plant-based foods, such as the majority of meal replacement products, can[.]" I might rephrase that to "sustainable plant-based foods that are the majority of meal replacement products can[…]," which would remove the extra commas before a list. Or, maybe rephrased to "A shift from animal-based foods to more sustainable plant-based meal replacement products can reduce greenhouse gas emissions, land use, and water use."

I'd probably also move the last sentence in the first paragraph of the lead to the third or fourth sentence. I think the third sentence might be preferable as that leads to the medically prescribed meal replacements for vitamins and minerals, and then to how bodybuilders use meal replacements.