User:ClaudiaVargasRamirez/Iris Morales/Mjos02 Peer Review

Hi Claudia,

You added a lot to your article. I really liked the addition of her political inspiration/role models. I think that helps readers understand what she stood for and is a nice tribute in general. Your summary of her "Further education and Community Engagements" section was also a nice addition. It helps with the flow of the article.

You did a great job of maintaining a neutral tone, however, some sections of your article were a bit unclear. For example, I didn't know what you meant by "Her contributions to the Young Lords Party was representative of her socialist and internationalist views that precedent Puerto Rican History." There are other sentences that sound off.

Your sources are good. The YouTube interview is a cool find.

Overall great additions, it just needs to be polished a bit.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ClaudiaVargasRamirez


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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ClaudiaVargasRamirez/Iris_Morales?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Iris Morales

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