User:ClaudiaVargasRamirez/Iris Morales/Tacovilla17 Peer Review

Hola Claudia,

I see that you have made plenty of revisions to Iris Morales's work. I appreciate the neutral tone, and it is well aided by quality sources. However, I would say to definitely watch out for small grammar mistakes sprinkled throughout your revisions, such as under the "Further education and Community Engagements" (which needs to be capitalized), where you misspell counselor in the opening statement. In addition, it seems that the phrase "because there was little understood about Puerto Rican history" is not necessary. It is important to remember that the information needs to be concise, with no fluff. I do appreciate the new addition of the New York Times Feature, and I like that you moved the reference of awards to an entire new section. Are there more awards she has been given, or do you plan to add to that section by pointing out her accomplishments?

Best,

Derek Villanueva

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