User:Claudiabudzyn/Green home/Danielphelps111 Peer Review

General info
(Claudia Budzyn)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Claudiabudzyn/Green home:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Green home:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Claudia's article body is sophisticated and has relevant information regarding her chosen topic. Claudia explained what green homes incorporate and has thoroughly explained the benefits, giving the reader a clear sense of the sustainability of green homes. Claudia concluded her first paragraph well, explaining the overall purpose and impact of green homes, which help the reader in understanding the topic that she is discussing (green homes) and why they are impactful. The lead has not been updated and the sources have not been updated. Claudia's Bibliography works, and is relevant to the information that Claudia added. Overall, Claudia's article body is neutral and is well balanced with general information and has a strong "why" without directly saying it, leaving the reader with a good interpretation of Claudia's topic of green homes.