User:Clauf20/Pott's disease/ScienceRules1 Peer Review

General info
Clauf20
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pott's disease
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pott's disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think that the added information is clear and concise. The position appears neutral, not swaying a person's side one way or another. I think the general structure of information flows well, and moves from topic to topic freely. However, I may suggest moving the paragraph about musculoskeletal tuberculosis to the top, as it feels like that would make the information move from more general to more specific. Although, if it is left the same, I feel that the information would connect in the same way. I am curious as to where you are going to add this section of the article on the actual page. I would recommend putting it either before or after the diagnosis section.

The grammar and spelling all seem correct from my knowledge. However, I may suggest rewording some of the sentences that list many examples. Specifically, the first paragraph with the sentence about poorer hygiene which just sounds a bit off. From my analysis your sources seem reliable and every statement made is connected to a cited source. The only other thing that I may suggest is if there are any visuals available such as charts or tables that would improve the information you provided. All in all, I think that this is a good addition to the Wikipedia page and you found reliable data about the epidemiology.