User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking/Casseygray Peer Review

General info
CleanBean
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD

You added a link to the lead paragraph which was great. The link seems to work, and the info is great. Overall lead paragraph is great.

CONTENT

Little content but overall content has great overall standing. Seems to be heavily researched and you seem to understand the topic!

TONE AND BALANCE

You kept it neutral which is great!

SOURCE AND REFERENCES

You have added a source to the page, maybe add a few more?

ORGANIZATION

Great organization and great layout!

MEDIA

You have a link, but maybe add some actual images?

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS

maybe begin adding some more information to the lead paragraph, content, etc.

'''Hey Cassey, thanks for the detailed review. I wanted to add a picture, but I felt that it was unnecessary and that it would be hard to find on that reflected my edit.'''