User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking/Mgjones2 Peer Review

General info
User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sleepwalking

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello. The study conducted in Australia provides valuable insights into sleepwalking and its association with sleep behaviors and bedtime routines in children. However, the edit would benefit from additional details about the study's methodology and sample size to strengthen its credibility. The link between sleepwalking, behavioral problems, and emotional issues requires further clarification and supporting evidence to establish a stronger cause-and-effect relationship. Overall, the paper's focus on children's sleep disorders is commendable, but it would benefit from more comprehensive evidence and clearer connections between the variables to reinforce its conclusions as it should correspond with the original article.