User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking/Mrs.Egyptian Peer Review

General info
Clean Bean
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:CleanBean/Sleepwalking - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Sleepwalking - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first thing I have been able to notice would be the way the article is written. While I do enjoy the flow of the article, it seems to have been written in a paper type style. I was able to look at the resources and saw that they were more-so journals vs. peer-reviewed articles. I noticed you focused on disorders associated with sleep walking and their consequences. I found this to be interesting. Since this is the draft, I understand why pictures are not present. The content is clear and easy to read, but again reads as a paper. All in all much more needs to be added and the way it is written should be updated.