User:Clfavor2/Sgraffito/Tuo68169 Peer Review

General info
Clfavor2
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Clfavor2/Sgraffito
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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This user has included two sources in their sandbox to potentially reference and include in their article, but has not included any information about their sources or their plans for their article contributions. I think they would most benefit from planning out in the sandbox how they plan to use these sources, and beginning to write sentences to move over to the article itself.