User:Clhild/Denali National Park and Preserve/Anomalocrisis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Clhild


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Denali National Park


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Denali National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good addition to the Glaciers section! Where would you be putting it?

The whole first part of the Permafrost section needs citations. Also if possible I recommend looking for sources other than the National Park Service- sometimes the Parks' websites will include references to journal articles that can provide more in depth information on recent research. The second to last paragraph also needs citations. I like how you reorganized the section to include an overview and the most important information first.

If you can, I would recommend going more in depth into the importance of permafrost and the effects of the loss of it, as well as the same thing for the glaciers section. Overall though your additions look really good!