User:Clhild/Denali National Park and Preserve/Emmamlewis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Clhild


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Clhild/Denali_National_Park_and_Preserve?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Denali National Park and Preserve

Evaluate the drafted changes
As far as I can see, the lead has not been updated to include what my peer has added. The sandbox only shows a portion though, so it may just not be added yet. The content that has been included so far is up to date and relevant. My peer is discussing climate change and the effect it has on the glaciers as well as the permafrost in the park. It is a very good addition so far. All of the content that has been added is neutral and not biased in any way. Everything presented is reliable statistics. I reviewed the links and they are reliable, working, and consistent and they reflect the topic that is being discussed very well. This article does not include any images yet, but I would recommend maybe including a graph to show a visual on how the loss of permafrost has progressed over the years. Overall, I thought the author has done a great job so far. It is clear they have not finished yet, but all of the sources and information make for a great topic and great final product.