User:Clm893/Dispositional affect/Dguy17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

CLM839 & Meghan Lilly


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Clm893/Dispositional affect
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dispositional affect

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the idea of creating a section for for Dispositional Affect in the Workplace. It seems like there is a lot of content available, whereas the article only has a few sentences addressing it.

Adding more sources to the "Dimensions" would be a good addition. Since there is only one source for both paragraphs for positive and negative affectivity, finding some sources that support the statements in the long paragraphs would make the article have more credibility.

I think the ideas for adding/editing parts of the article would be beneficial. An explanation of the study for your source 1 could be good. The study sounds interesting and I would like to know more about it.

Overall, I like where you are going with these edits and seeing more of your ideas become parts of the article will be nice. Good work!

Replay: Thank you for the review. We are defiantly going to make the dispositional affect in the work place section as best as we can. Are plan is to add more sources to all of what we are working especially the dimensions section. We also want to make the article read more fluently.