User:Clmalloy123/Crime in Italy/Mimidargan11 Peer Review

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Clare Malloy
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 * Crime in Italy
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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The article on crime in Italy was detailed, though it may have contained to much information. Suggestions made were based on this information,as Northern Italy and Southern Italy do not need their own subsections and can be combined. It was also recommended that other article edits specify or include what criminal groups are involved in the sub-section "Crime by Type." There were a lot of different types of crimes, but not enough mention of the perpetrators. It was noted that all the sources listed were relevant and current, which would strengthen the article. Along with the mention of countries that are victims of Italy's intense tracking, this was a solid point. Overall, the Table of contents and bibliography were well put together, and the article edits should come out fine if topics remain concise and focus on main events, as any attempts to cover Italy entirely may take away from the big picture.