User:CloudyMineral/Goals, plans, action theory/Dj922 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! This article offers a straightforward overview of the theory and its application. Are there any criticisms of this theory? Does this theory have any current usage? Notably, this article references the term ‘model’ first as a descriptor in the Introduction section, then references a “GPA model” under the section ‘Sec. goals’. Although there are similarities between theories and models, they have different functions. It could be helpful to either illustrate the GPA model, or change the wording.

References & Citations - There are currently 14 references, but the overall content of the page relies heavily on Dillard (the drafter of this theory). It could be useful to find secondary sources that cite the use and application of this theory in real world settings. Also, the most recent source is over 10 years old. There could be literature or systematic analyses that are more recent. ~