User:Cm0030/Journey to the West: Conquering the Demons/KylinZX Peer Review

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Cm0030


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 * Journey to the West: Conquering the Demons


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Evaluate the drafted changes
The leading part of this article briefly introduces the movie and provides basic information for readers. The most impressive part is the plot. It is summarized in great detail and brilliantly, helping the reader to understand the plot completely. In the cast section, perhaps appropriate pictures and character explanations will help the reader understand the relevant information. And there was a shortage of staff to introduce the film. In introducing the box office, the author quoted a lot of data and showed the box office of the film to the readers in great detail. The article even mentions the sequel to the movie, which is the surprising part. The citation list is also comprehensive. In general, the framework of this article has been completed, and the rest is to improve the sentence. My suggestion is to add more images and improve the cast section.