User:Cm0030/Journey to the West: Conquering the Demons/Yiding wang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

It is journey to the west,conquering the demon.Which edit by Cm and Scott.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cm0030/Journey_to_the_West%3A_Conquering_the_Demons?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Journey to the West: Conquering the Demons

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Well I think this article is a pretty completely draft.However maybe should add more details and character informations in it.But in another aspect I should admit that this should be a good complement article to the original one.Because it provide some material beyond’s the film.So in this case we could say it just improve the original article.