User:Cmanus16/sandbox

Wikipedia's General Pattern

Detailed Lead Section: Our group is planning on restructuring this section and adding more general information (founding date, CEO, pictures, etc.) on the Bunn-O-Matic Corporation.

Clearer Structure: We want to add different headings and subheadings to distinguish parts of the company, such as a history section and a product section.

Balanced Content: Since the Bunn-O-Matic Corporation is a broad topic, we will provide the most relevant information to save time.

Neutral Tone: To keep our article as unbiased as possible, we will avoid using certain words or attempt to share our opinion on Bunn-O-Matic.

Good Sourcing: We can find better sources for our article by looking through different databases such as Mergent Intellect Database, Cheetah, and Business Source Complete.

Indications of Existing Problems

Warning Banners: Our article does not include any warning banners from Wikipedia.

Fragmented Lead Section: Currently, the lead section is the only content in the article. We want to shorten it and provide only general information on the company. Our group also wants to change the main picture and find a clearer image of the Bunn-O-Matic logo.

Value Statements: In its current state, the article has little to no value statements that try to place Bunn as the best coffee maker. We want to continue this by writing in an unbiased manner.

Gaps in Sourcing: Almost every sentence in the article has a source accounted for it. Unfortunately, these sources are not all robust, and we plan to fix this by restructuring the article and finding better sources.

Underdeveloped Reference Section: Half of the article's references are not considered robust. We will find more credible sources through searching business databases provided by Georgia Southern's library.

Imbalanced Sections: Currently, the article is highly unorganized, and a lot of information is missing. We will fix this by putting relevant information on history and products under specific headings and subheadings.

Who is Working on What Section?

Sara Gravley and Joey Bergeman are working on the history section while Casey Manus and Josh Gee are working on the products section. All of us will contribute to the lead and citations sections.

What Changed Since the Presentation?

At the moment, we decided to shorten the number of sections to only focus on the history and products of Bunn-O-Matic. We might add more sections in the future, depending on our time and research.

Areas We Intend to Work On, and Areas That We Want to Avoid

As we noted above, our group will improve the general pattern of the article and remove many of the existing problems. The article will be better by the time we finish, but it will not be as detailed as some other coffee maker Wikipedia pages because of the amount of time we have and the number of sources on the topic.