User:Cmcopti/J. D. March/Bmarra Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

cmcopti


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Strong reference list with great sources and bibliography- clearly a well-sourced article for Wikipedia. I also appreciated the section on the personal life as I think that you bring up important biographical information that is imperative to understanding this author's life. You make clear the author's fluid sexuality addressing each change with clarity.

I do wish that you would add some information about her work more specifically. Is it possible to describe their work? What kind of comics was this author creating? I believe you could add this information without becoming biased. On that note, I appreciated the lack of bias in the article. Nowhere is there a concern of bias or partiality in the article.

Overall, I think this is a great job!