User:Cmoliva14/WASH/Sandro1324 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cmolivia14


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cmolivia14/WASH


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * WASH

Evaluate the drafted changes
Maybe the edits that are being made are in the personal sand box, but it doesn't appear to have drafts made to the section chosen yet, but I do see the potential of what might be added. I would just recommend to make sure it is something that isn't already talked about. Under the first paragraph it seems they may have started their edit but maybe it is from the original article. Regardless, if women are going to be talked about in the climate change section I wouldn't recommend adding that since women have their own section already in the WASH article.