User:Cmurphy22/Acetobacter aceti/Emilygkeller Peer Review

General info
Cmurphy22
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cmurphy22/Acetobacter aceti
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Acetobacter aceti

Evaluate the drafted changes
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In the first sentence of the article, I would move peritrichous flagella somewhere else and combine it with the second sentence to flow better. I would move the part about temperature to the end of the first paragraph because it divided the sentences about fermentation.

acetic acid production section was well written

cite first sentence in potential cure for diabetes

In the pink disease in pineapples section 4th sentence, remove seems not scientific writing