User:Cmurphy22/Evaluate an Article

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Lily Newton - Wikipedia

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I chose this article because I think it's important to commemorate important scientists who did hard work in their field.

Evaluate the article
This article could use a more detailed lead as there is only one sentence that briefly describes Lily Newton but doesn't highlight any of the important details listed in the following paragraphs. It does not give the reader a good understanding of what the article is about. The Career section may be able to split into subsections such as having an "achievements" section. The sources are current and the links work. The article seems well-written and there are no obvious spelling errors. Overall, the article does a good job of detailing the career of Lily Rose, however, it could benefit from a longer lead to give the reader an idea of what the article is about. It also only has 3 sections so there may be more details about her life that could be added.