User:Cnvillal/Alicia Garza/Dominiquemm98 Peer Review

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Username: Cnvillal/Alicia Garza

Peer Review By Dominique Montoya

After going over the page, I believe the structure is quite strong and flows smoothly. The introduction gives a lot of details about Alicia's early life, which I thought was a good way to catch peoples attention and why she became who she is now. Throughout the page the tone was very neutral and there were no signs of bias within the writing. One thing that I do want to point out is the section about Alicia's personal life. Do y'all plan to expand in that area because the tattoo explanation is spot on, but is that the only thing people want to add. If there were more personal things about Alicia's life than that would be more intriguing. Also, the resources that were apart of this page are reliable because the are up to date, but I would suggest to add a little more to the page. Overall, the page is looking amazing and the information that was provided helped me understand Alicia Garza much better so keep up the goos work!


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