User:Cnvillal/Alicia Garza/ItsAML Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cnvillal - Alicia Garza


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cnvillal/Alicia_Garza?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists
 * Alicia Garza - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The page is going great so far! I would like to see what y'all's lead sentence looks like when its finished. The content sections y'all have are good, I love how much you have for her career but would like to see more of her personal life as the latter needs some filling up. Y'all's content is really well written, I just think some formatting changes could be made to the flow of the article, specifically after career and before y'all's references. I really like the quote you brought in and how it is on the side of the page, if y'all can add more of those that would be amazing. I think this article is doing really well, I like how yall redid her early life, it helped clarify and expand from the original article a lot. Great job overall, just keep going!