User:Cnvillal/Alicia Garza/Sarahkadhium Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cnvillal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cnvillal/Alicia_Garza?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alicia Garza

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead paragraph summarizes Alicia Garza's life; however, further detail about information mentioned later in this article will be beneficial.I found the tattoo section to be really interesting, and it gave the article a more personal touch. A lead to the article's career section will include an overview of what is covered in all parts within that section to the public. I believe that distinguishing the information about early life and education from the information about careers will be beneficial. Even, articles like the one written by Alicia Garza for the Guardian, "Black Lives Matter's Alicia Garza: ‘Leadership today doesn't look like Martin Luther King'" This article contains references as well as links to other resources. This article might use a little more structure to be complete, but it contains useful details and references. More details about articles she's written and interviews she's conducted will be beneficial.