User:Cnvillal/Alicia Garza/Shassan98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/users/MontseAguilar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cnvillal/Alicia_Garza?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alicia Garza

Introduction:
Written very succinctly and briefly, as all introductions should be. Just make sure the links are working!

Content:
In terms of education, consider linking to articles (you'll probably be able to find some from UCSD's The Guardian or The Triton) covering her work during undergrad. The notable speech was covered very well. As for acts of protest, I'm sure she's known for more than just that Bay Area Rapid Transit protest. Also, where is the citation for the protest itself?

Tone and balance:
Article appears free of bias as of right now.

Sources and references:
Refer to my comments in content. Also, for early career and education, where it mentions her mother's death by gliogastoma, the citation next to it makes no sense.

Organization:
Well structured and no grammatical errors that I could pick up on.

Overall impression:
I would say this article has been written pretty well, save for linking some of the other things I mentioned. Something else to also consider might be any of the other publications she's published, since the article does mention she's been on multiple media platforms. Material is excellent overall - keep up the good work!