User:Coasummerprograms

Ah, well...
Beaten by the admin. If you try again, remember that articles are supposed to be 'about' not 'by'. Words like 'we' and 'our' are a kiss of death. So (mostly) are 'offers', 'focus', and anything else that suggests 'brochure talk'.... References are essential. These should be independent (and preferably not wildly favourable - that's always suspect) and reliable. See WP:RS. Another thing to remember that this is an encyclopaedia, not a directory. What you can do on aboutus and LinkedIn, you can't always do here. Big businesses are easily shown to be notable. Small ones and non-profits are not as easy to prove. It's not just the matter of profit or not. (A lot of big businesses are currently non-profit and not very happy about it...) It's notability. A long history helps. Famous alumni don't go amiss - but notability doesn't rub off. Promotional (i.e. spam WP:SPAM) and copyright violations get hit quick. Basically, if it reads like a brochure or poster, it's no go. Read some other articles. (If they fail that test, tag them or let me know...) Pretend you are a total outsider. You are on a course, and an assignment is to report on the camp. You are just giving information, not selling the place. Not easy if you ARE connected. If you try again, keep it on your userpage and clearly mark it DRAFT. Then let me know and I'll pick nits. Peridon (talk) 22:14, 4 October 2010 (UTC)