User:Cobrownlin/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Arizona Snowbowl

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I live in Arizona, and have been to snowbowl many times. Initial impressions are that while it contains a fairly thorough introduction and history of the ski park, it lacks sufficient citations for much of the history section.

Evaluate the article
The lead section provides a succinct and relevant overview of the topic.

It appears that the history of the park is overrepresented in the article, though I would say it is just that the other section(s) are underrepresented. The history is thorough and relevant.

The tone is adequately neutral, and does not over or under represent any of the viewpoints present in the article.

The sources are the most lacking part of the article. There are very few citations for any of the disputes between the Native people of the area and the government of Flagstaff.

The talk page has not been edited since 2013, and is fairly small in scope. Based on my reading of the talk page and article, most of the points in the talk page have been addressed at this point.

The article is graded at "C", which I agree with. The history appears to provide a thorough overview of the park, but it plagued by a lack of citation and sources to back up the content within. The article is lacking in sections beyond its history, with only one other section that is only a paragraph long. The biggest improvements that could be made are first to back up the information stated by the article, and then to create and expand other sections of the article.