User:Cocoa2021/Pliocene/Ndayap Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cocoa2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cocoa2021/Pliocene?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pliocene
 * Pliocene

Evaluate the drafted changes
Cocoa2021 adds relevant information that is pertinent to the article of the Pliocene as a whole. I do, however, believe that more could potentially be added to the environment subsection.