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= Article Evaluation =

Doric Order

-Introduction has a bit of superfluous language. Needs to be streamlined for better understanding by the general public.

-Says, "The Doric is most easily recognised by the simple circular capitals at the top of columns." While this is a great indicator it also is not the only element that must be evaluated to determine whether it is Doric or not. Tuscan columns also have a circular capital. There are also non-cassical columns that have the simple circular capitals. Phrase needs to be re-evaluated.

-Lack of citation in third paragraph in introduction. Or is source 3 the only source used for this section?

-phrases bolded such as "the doric corner conflict" when they don't need to be.

-Modern section is sparse. Could use more information.

-More information could be added to the different features of doric temples.

-Heavy citation of John Summerson's The Classical Language of Architecture, needs a more balanced use of citations.

= Week 6 =

House of the Vettii

I plan to add more about the architecture and the paintings depicted inside the house. I will also clean up the plan section so it is not talking about the images in the house, just the architectural plans. I will then add a paintings section where I will write about the paintings in this house. Finally, I will add a history section featuring any information I can find from sources about the life of the house from creation to now.