User:Coconut02/Addiction psychology/Bendetwiler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Coconut02

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Coconut02/Addiction_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Addiction psychology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Addiction psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading the article and the information that you wanted to add, I think that overall you did a good job editing this article. I think the lead section is well done and included a good amount of information on what was going to be discussed in the article. The content that you want to add to the article seems pretty relevant to the topic being discussed and after looking at your sources, they all seem credible. Also, after reading the sections that you want to add, you kept a very neutral tone with your writing.

After reading your article draft there were only a few minor things that I thought you could change or add. One thing I noticed was a small grammatical error in the first sentence of the Outpatient - Treatment Programs section. I would recommend making outpatient treatment program plural in the first sentence since there are multiple programs that vary. Another thing that I was unsure about was that in the same section it talks about outpatient programs dealing with people who have mental health problems. I would recommend adding information on how this type of program affects mental health and if there is a downside from that aspect as well.