User:CoffeeShopFantasy/Mycoplasma genitalium/Dentbassist Peer Review

General info

 * Reviewing work of: CoffeeShopFantasy, Ilovemilo12, Microscopicpizza, Reejisoo


 * Draft being reviewed: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:CoffeeShopFantasy/Mycoplasma_genitalium?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template:
 * Current version of the article (if it exists: Mycoplasma genitalium:

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article already has a strong lead that gives a general overview of Mycoplasma genitalium and its key attributes. As for the added material in the sand box, it seems like the over all theme is Mgens adhesion abilities and its structure. The added information does a great job of explaining the concept of the tip organelle and its three main parts. Looking at the original article, it seems like there is very little touching on the topic of structure and this information would make a solid "structure" section perhaps. The sources seem to all back up the claims made in the added material and I found no form of plagiarism in the new material. Over all, this seems like a solid addition to the article of Mgen, but there are some grammar and word tense/ word choice issues that could be addressed to improve the over all understandability of the content. A few other topics that could be interesting to add to the current wikipedia page that are missing are metabolism of Mycoplasma genitalium and culture growth of the bacteria.