User:Cognitura/Gender inequality in Japan/Tarabien Peer Review

Compelling topic. Thank you for your organized contribution draft. Everything is relevant to the topic. The characteristics of neutrality are present and in its final stages. Your references are thoughtful and thorough. There are a host of viewpoints, yet I see you approaching them with clarity. Distinction seems to be an item to keep in mind with this article. Perhaps your lead could move toward more conciseness and simplicity at the start. The references to other pages are well done. Your plan of action is evident. Tarabien (talk) 05:41, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

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